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The Sun Set Fireball Red

The sun set like a fireball but invisible Clouds had the it hidden from view So the sun won the battle Casting the whole western cloudy sky red Even clouds wrapped to the northeast paled pink Beauty for humans ~ animals? to behold Blessings to end the day, excitement at God's paintbrush Thank you God for your love and bounty Cody came home yesterday!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/31/2011 5:14:00 PM
aha! One I had never seen. I love a sun like this one, sara. WEll, goodbye. I better get off here .Hubbie on his way home from a long week of work. Probably I can't come on for over a day from now. Happy new years. Andrea
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:59:00 PM
Love your free verse style! I am realy do! Also I am drawn in by your titles. Wow, you really never disappoint me on here.
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Date: 6/24/2011 2:04:00 PM
You nailed it - "God's paintbrush" I've seen that sunset. LOve, daver
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Date: 6/24/2011 11:33:00 AM
loved every word you wrote here, such a lovely poem you penned. thank you for commenting on All Alone Now.
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:32:00 AM
Sweeeeeeeeeet picture,Sara.
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:07:00 AM
yeyyy, greaat stuff and new, sara... please read my "soup safari"; i mentioned you with respect; hope you won't mind! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:51:00 AM
wonderful news Sara.. wonderful expressive words.. u should enter this beauty into Brian's new contest.. such imagery and god's paintbrush too ..awesome luv..
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:18:00 AM
Smile ~ “Nice Reference Unto `The God of Wonders` &, Glad to Hear of The Hearts Blessings ~ `Love, Always,`” John!:) ~
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:48:00 AM
great news! I am glad he is home. this is an excellent write.
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