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The Sun Rose Very Rose

Nighttime ebony hues, turned to lovely shades of rose,
And a creamy moon yet shone, about to make its escape.
The song of praise commenced from the emerald treetops,
And other stirrings began the summer's day happenings.
I had awakened by and by, to dreamy roses in the sky!
I was pleased that day, a golden sun was coming my way,
With beauty in its wake, in charmed customary fashion.
The roses from my garden, sat fragrantly in the vase,
Waiting in silent patience, for deep admiration to go by.
A wonderful beginning to an exceedingly promising day,
Wrapped in the warmth of summer's pleasant beginning!
Sleep wouldn't return to me, because day was calling,
And rose tinted daylight, decorated my bedroom walls,
And joy and eagerness crowded the world like sunshine!


Written on April 28, 2021
For: What's in a title in 14-20 lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 12:58 AM
Best to have rose-colored glasses, esp. these days. ~ See the world the rosy way, gw
Buehler Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Thank you for that colorful comment, Gershon. :D
Ball Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 10:49 PM
A beautifully described Summer morning. I felt I too was waking to the rose colored morn. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 12:28 PM
I'm so glad you felt you experienced the rose colored dawn. thank you for your expressions of appreciation. :D
Horsman Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 10:53 PM
Oh so beautiful, The imagery superb.
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment. :D
Buhagiar Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 10:29 PM
I notice a lot of play on words. You imagination is is full swing as usual. A lovely pretty poem.
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Victor. :D
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