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Nighttime ebony hues, turned to lovely shades of rose, And a creamy moon yet shone, about to make its escape. The song of praise commenced from the emerald treetops, And other stirrings began the summer's day happenings. I had awakened by and by, to dreamy roses in the sky! I was pleased that day, a golden sun was coming my way, With beauty in its wake, in charmed customary fashion. The roses from my garden, sat fragrantly in the vase, Waiting in silent patience, for deep admiration to go by. A wonderful beginning to an exceedingly promising day, Wrapped in the warmth of summer's pleasant beginning! Sleep wouldn't return to me, because day was calling, And rose tinted daylight, decorated my bedroom walls, And joy and eagerness crowded the world like sunshine! Written on April 28, 2021 For: What's in a title in 14-20 lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/6/2021 12:58:00 AM
Best to have rose-colored glasses, esp. these days. ~ See the world the rosy way, gw
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/6/2021 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for that colorful comment, Gershon. :D
Date: 4/30/2021 10:49:00 PM
A beautifully described Summer morning. I felt I too was waking to the rose colored morn. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/1/2021 12:28:00 PM
I'm so glad you felt you experienced the rose colored dawn. thank you for your expressions of appreciation. :D
Date: 4/28/2021 10:53:00 PM
Oh so beautiful, The imagery superb.
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Date: 5/1/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment. :D
Date: 4/28/2021 10:29:00 PM
I notice a lot of play on words. You imagination is is full swing as usual. A lovely pretty poem.
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Date: 5/1/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Victor. :D

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