The Sun Is Gone

cold 
spent moments
slipped away unnoticed
and spotlighted suffering

solid 
life cubes stacked
each success and mistake
trapped, time lost
hopes, regrets and days
until all I have are nights
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Wilson Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 8:34 PM
this is so sad but very well written...luv,Deb
Copland Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:32 PM
thank you for your nice comment, and taking the time read my poem.
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