The Sun Burns

We should become sun for others
Moons will start shining
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Abdullah Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 10:20 AM
Amazing... This poem beautifully captures the essence of selflessness, urging us to radiate warmth and light like the sun for others. It suggests that by doing so, we can inspire a radiant glow in others, akin to the moons reflecting the sun's brilliance. A profound reminder of the power of compassion and generosity in illuminating the world around us.
Zik Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Thank you so much, Husnain Abdullah
Kaufman Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 1:53 PM
Very very nice in so few words.Thank you Nancy
Zik Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 6:16 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words and stopping by, Nancy Kaufman
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