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The Sun Burns

We should become sun for others Moons will start shining

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Husnain Abdullah

Date: 1/28/2024 10:20:00 AM

Amazing... This poem beautifully captures the essence of selflessness, urging us to radiate warmth and light like the sun for others. It suggests that by doing so, we can inspire a radiant glow in others, akin to the moons reflecting the sun's brilliance. A profound reminder of the power of compassion and generosity in illuminating the world around us.

Dr Zik
Date: 2/16/2024 6:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Husnain Abdullah

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 8/5/2021 1:53:00 PM

Very very nice in so few words.Thank you Nancy

Dr Zik
Date: 2/16/2024 6:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for the kind words and stopping by, Nancy Kaufman