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The Sun Bowed Down To Me

The sun bowed down to me Has sent its brightest gleam Of violet hues aglow its beams Immersed my soul whole with its heat To beg my heart to trust its plea. My fears I lay aside for Thee Choosing to believe Thy flares of heat That soothed my yearning soul to peace Aware Thy light my fears have freed My heart complete I give to Thee. The sun bowed down to me Unworthy is the way I feel Return to you Thy love I seek To live my life in thanking Thee For never will I your side leave. By CarolineCecile copyright © 02.14.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/16/2010 6:07:00 PM
Very charming and eloquent!
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Date: 2/20/2010 9:03:00 PM
Amazing Caroline, You write beautifully it's so smooth and flowing and as from a chefs perspectice a perfectly blended batter or mousse and just as easily palatable =) Much appreciated Sang
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Date: 2/15/2010 11:47:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Caroline. I enjoyed reading it. It is a truly beautiful piece. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2010 5:09:00 AM
Inspirational and inspiring ..your words are so elegantly flowing to reveal your message ... HE is the only valentine for my heart and He makes everything OK... works for me.. and this lovely "beauty" is a treasure.. thankxxx for your special and warm comments on my poetry reads ..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/15/2010 4:08:00 AM
beautiful Love story. sun bowing down great explanation of the humility one feels for so wonderful a phenomenon. Very nice Caroline. inspiring. Appreciate it to start my day in this meditation-Robert
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Date: 2/14/2010 4:29:00 PM
Interesting write that you have penned in this faith poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/14/2010 4:02:00 PM
Dear Caroline, what a great poem, beautiful and uplifting. Thank you for sharing it this beautiful Sunday. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 2/14/2010 3:37:00 PM
Very inspirational write. We all need to be grateful. Thanks for the reminder.
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