The Sun Bowed Down To Me

The sun bowed down to me
Has sent its brightest gleam
Of violet hues aglow its beams
Immersed my soul whole with its heat
To beg my heart to trust its plea.

My fears I lay aside for Thee
Choosing to believe Thy flares of heat
That soothed my yearning soul to peace
Aware Thy light my fears have freed
My heart complete I give to Thee.

The sun bowed down to me
Unworthy is the way I feel
Return to you Thy love I seek
To live my life in thanking Thee
For never will I your side leave.

By CarolineCecile
copyright © 02.14.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Byrne Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 6:07 PM
Very charming and eloquent!
Ford Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 9:03 PM
Amazing Caroline, You write beautifully it's so smooth and flowing and as from a chefs perspectice a perfectly blended batter or mousse and just as easily palatable =) Much appreciated Sang
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February 15, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Caroline. I enjoyed reading it. It is a truly beautiful piece. Love, Carol
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February 15, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Inspirational and inspiring ..your words are so elegantly flowing to reveal your message ... HE is the only valentine for my heart and He makes everything OK... works for me.. and this lovely "beauty" is a treasure.. thankxxx for your special and warm comments on my poetry reads ..luv.. Linda-Marie
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February 15, 2010 at 4:08 AM
beautiful Love story. sun bowing down great explanation of the humility one feels for so wonderful a phenomenon. Very nice Caroline. inspiring. Appreciate it to start my day in this meditation-Robert
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February 14, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Interesting write that you have penned in this faith poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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February 14, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Dear Caroline, what a great poem, beautiful and uplifting. Thank you for sharing it this beautiful Sunday. Peace, love, Audrey
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February 14, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Very inspirational write. We all need to be grateful. Thanks for the reminder.
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