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The Sun and the Earth

I am always around you
No matter where you go
Day after day, it never felt boring looking at you
You have strongly attracted me
just like gravity

Slowly and gently you shine on me
Warming up every part of me
Making me lively
Without you,
I am but a frozen, dead planet

[TIONG JIA HENG - SERI JUBLI INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL]

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Date: 9/11/2022 11:04:00 PM
The perfect relationship is what this poem describes. One without the other is catastrophic. I enjoyed reading this poem. :)
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