The Sun

you’re more than just a heart of heat and light
     a rife marvel in the sky
          an axiom of one’s smile

05.26.16

smilesunsunshinekimo

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Robert Lindley

June 8, 2018 at 6:58 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Moon Flower

June 8, 2018 at 7:53 AM

Thank you, Robert. :)

Eve Roper

June 7, 2018 at 9:08 PM

Congratulations on your win :) great write, Moon Flower. Hugs Eve

Moon Flower

June 8, 2018 at 7:54 AM

Thank you, Eve. :)

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2018 at 7:20 PM

great imagery. Congrats for your win.

Moon Flower

June 8, 2018 at 7:55 AM

Thank you, Andrea. :)

Heidi Sands

June 7, 2018 at 1:02 PM

Congratulations for your win Moon Flower :)

Moon Flower

June 8, 2018 at 7:55 AM

Thank you, Heidi. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 7, 2018 at 1:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

June 8, 2018 at 7:56 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs

Silent One

June 7, 2018 at 12:28 PM

Lovely kimo.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Moon Flower

June 8, 2018 at 7:57 AM

Thank you for the placement, S.O. :)

Casarah Nance

October 18, 2016 at 5:07 PM

:) really good ! grats on your win

Moon Flower

June 7, 2018 at 6:09 AM

Thank you, Casarah. :)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

October 17, 2016 at 12:02 AM

Beautiful write - congratulations on your placement. Mark

Moon Flower

October 17, 2016 at 11:00 AM

Thank you Mark Paul. :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 16, 2016 at 7:26 PM

i love the sun. So I love this kimo. Congrats on your win.

Moon Flower

October 17, 2016 at 11:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Beautiful Scars

October 16, 2016 at 2:13 PM

beautiful Moon Flower! Congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Moon Flower

October 17, 2016 at 11:01 AM

Thank you Laura. :)

Paul Callus

October 16, 2016 at 1:56 PM

Wow! Lovely and creative, to say the least:) That last line is excellent. Congratulations on a most worthy win. Regards // paul

Moon Flower

October 17, 2016 at 11:01 AM

Thanks for the kind words, Paul. :)

Anu Nayak

October 16, 2016 at 1:47 PM

Hearty congrats on your great win dear Moon Flower, lovely description of Sun, nicely penned kimo, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)

Moon Flower

October 17, 2016 at 11:03 AM

Thanks Anulaxmi. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

July 9, 2016 at 3:44 PM

Beautiful Moon! Congratulations on making the list! 7 ; )

Moon Flower

October 17, 2016 at 11:03 AM

Thank you Connie. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 5, 2016 at 2:51 PM

- Congratulations, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

October 17, 2016 at 11:05 AM

Thank you Sunshine :)

Casarah Nance

May 31, 2016 at 8:19 AM

Very nice!

Moon Flower

October 17, 2016 at 11:06 AM

Thank you Casarah :)

Justin Bordner

May 29, 2016 at 7:51 PM

You possess a beautiful, and brilliant poetic mind Moon Flower..."An axiom of one's smile..." that's nice! You have a quiet intensity that I like...J.A.B.

Moon Flower

October 17, 2016 at 11:06 AM

Thank you Justin :)