The Sun

you’re more than just a heart of heat and light
     a rife marvel in the sky
          an axiom of one’s smile

05.26.16

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/8/2018 6:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Moon Flower
Date: 6/8/2018 7:53:00 AM

Thank you, Robert. :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2018 9:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win :) great write, Moon Flower. Hugs Eve

Moon Flower
Date: 6/8/2018 7:54:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2018 7:20:00 PM

great imagery. Congrats for your win.

Moon Flower
Date: 6/8/2018 7:55:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2018 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Moon Flower :)

Moon Flower
Date: 6/8/2018 7:55:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2018 1:00:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower
Date: 6/8/2018 7:56:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs

Silent One

Date: 6/7/2018 12:28:00 PM

Lovely kimo.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Moon Flower
Date: 6/8/2018 7:57:00 AM

Thank you for the placement, S.O. :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/18/2016 5:07:00 PM

:) really good ! grats on your win

Moon Flower
Date: 6/7/2018 6:09:00 AM

Thank you, Casarah. :)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 10/17/2016 12:02:00 AM

Beautiful write - congratulations on your placement. Mark

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:00:00 AM

Thank you Mark Paul. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:26:00 PM

i love the sun. So I love this kimo. Congrats on your win.

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:00:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Beautiful Scars

Date: 10/16/2016 2:13:00 PM

beautiful Moon Flower! Congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:01:00 AM

Thank you Laura. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2016 1:56:00 PM

Wow! Lovely and creative, to say the least:) That last line is excellent. Congratulations on a most worthy win. Regards // paul

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:01:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words, Paul. :)

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/16/2016 1:47:00 PM

Hearty congrats on your great win dear Moon Flower, lovely description of Sun, nicely penned kimo, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:03:00 AM

Thanks Anulaxmi. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2016 3:44:00 PM

Beautiful Moon! Congratulations on making the list! 7 ; )

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:03:00 AM

Thank you Connie. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2016 2:51:00 PM

- Congratulations, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:05:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/31/2016 8:19:00 AM

Very nice!

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Casarah :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/29/2016 7:51:00 PM

You possess a beautiful, and brilliant poetic mind Moon Flower..."An axiom of one's smile..." that's nice! You have a quiet intensity that I like...J.A.B.

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Justin :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2016 8:35:00 PM

I like it, Moon Flower. Very nice.

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2016 2:06:00 PM

- Beautiful written, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Sun :)

Moon Flower
Date: 10/17/2016 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Anne-lise :)