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The Sun

from all the despair and hopelessness i created a sun and gazed upon it it was powerful but i knew it was hollow but it was because of the sun that i could move on and that sun shone bright in my heart for quite a while and all the fake strength and fake hope i created flourished until it collapsed into what it was made of for no sun that was made this way was to shine forever and you can't force something that wasn't there in the first place

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Date: 2/15/2016 6:49:00 PM
well done on the imagery. LINDA
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