Eric Boddie Poet Rhyme

The Sun

thanks for this inspiration skat....;)

THE SUN
by:  Eric L. Boddie

The sun, to the Earth, gives Life
Just as we Receive It Through The Son, Jesus Christ

The sun, God's Gift to all men, it even warms the skin
While The Son Keeps us warm from within

The sun, that big, great, glorious ball of light in the sky
The Son, The Light That Gives Life to you and I

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Rita Solis Radius September 3, 2015 at 12:09 PM Yes! yes! yes! I really like this one! Thanks for your inspiration and your faith; God bless you, fellow poet. Rita. Eric Boddie September 14, 2015 at 10:10 AM thank you rita....nothing is as Bright As The Son....;)

Carrie White August 29, 2015 at 10:53 AM Amen. good write. :) Eric Boddie August 30, 2015 at 2:16 PM thank you carrie.....I really enjoyed this write....I had to revise it a few times but I think the final product was well worth it....;)

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 8:38 PM the perfect religiously themed poem on sun/son. WEll done!! Eric Boddie August 30, 2015 at 2:15 PM thank you andrea but I don't believe in religion....we all NEED FAITH....;)

Alexis Y. August 18, 2015 at 12:23 AM Eric, I'm glad this inspirational piece made it on the winner's list.Congratulations on your awesome win. :-)Alexis Eric Boddie August 30, 2015 at 2:14 PM thank you alexis....actually, I won when I wrote it....this was great inspiration for me....;)

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 11:12 PM Thank you Eric, Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT Eric Boddie August 30, 2015 at 2:12 PM thank you skat....I almost messed up but I went back and revised it....and 8 is my number for sure....;)

Lena Smith Carter August 7, 2015 at 9:07 PM Truly inspirational write! Eric Boddie August 7, 2015 at 10:41 PM it is all about The Son with me....;)

Alexis Y. August 6, 2015 at 7:08 PM I agree with everything you wrote. You described the "sun" and " Jesus" really well. Your pen is exceptional. Excellent job! :-) Alexis 7 Eric Boddie August 7, 2015 at 11:30 AM thank you alexis....the sun and The Son are God's Gifts to us....;)

Yolanda Scott August 5, 2015 at 8:05 PM Another nice write Eric!!! Eric Boddie August 7, 2015 at 11:26 AM thank you Yolanda....I wrote it for the contest by skat....;)

Emile Pinet August 5, 2015 at 1:42 PM Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your heart and a peek at your soul. Emile. Eric Boddie August 5, 2015 at 2:33 PM thank you emile....I try...

Anne-Lise Andresen August 5, 2015 at 1:34 PM - Eric, a really beautiful poem - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eric Boddie August 5, 2015 at 2:32 PM thank you anne....I stay in search of inspiration....;)

Diane Christian August 5, 2015 at 12:33 PM Amen beautiful written and well said. i could almost sing these words. Eric Boddie August 5, 2015 at 12:40 PM thank you diane....I saw skats contest and thought I would give it a shot....I finally got it like I want it too....;)