The Sun

kissed my face today, said hurry up and get your day done
before i go away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 4, 2010 at 2:34 PM
Sun kisses are the best :) It wants you to hurry up and finish your day so you can go out and play & enjoy it before it's gone-- what a wonderful image, Michelle!
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May 2, 2010 at 6:42 PM
That ole sun's always making us hurry ...but at least kisses us first...-thanks for your kind comments Michelle. -Robert
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May 1, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Great to be kissed by the sun for it gives a good feeling and brings good chemicals to our body that make us feel good..Good topic about which to write...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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