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The Sun

kissed my face today, said hurry up and get your day done before i go away.

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Rachel W

Date: 5/4/2010 2:34:00 PM

Sun kisses are the best :) It wants you to hurry up and finish your day so you can go out and play & enjoy it before it's gone-- what a wonderful image, Michelle!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/2/2010 6:42:00 PM

That ole sun's always making us hurry ...but at least kisses us first...-thanks for your kind comments Michelle. -Robert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2010 5:55:00 PM

Great to be kissed by the sun for it gives a good feeling and brings good chemicals to our body that make us feel good..Good topic about which to write...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara