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The Summer I Was Fourteen

It was packed. Hot and steamy. Bathroom breaks were rare. And so was food. We arrived and it Was heavily filled. We left and it Was deserted. Wednesday. He fell. The ER Calling out our name but we Ignored it. Finally basic care was Met with an angry boy. Fighting To be left alone. 11:00 PM. We rushed and were helped. Patience is nowhere to be found. Barfbags, fake doctors, unicorns and More kept us company throughout the Night. Finally, we left too tired to do anything. It beckoned us to it’s comfy linens. To it’s warmth. We couldn’t resist. Just one night we said. We were fed one meal. Then we departed. The long journey would be over soon. One more Night and it would all be over. Friday. It was filled with canoeing and Kayaking. Flirting and 20-second relationships. Water fun and water incidents. Pain and relief. We were ready for home. Though another adventure awaited us the moment we arrived.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 2:24:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Morgen. :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:45:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/26/2016 2:36:00 PM
Morgen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/26/2016 10:48:00 AM
Morgan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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