The Sum

Worth, as the world sees it
Calculated by what you have,
Not by who you are
Just another fly in the jar.

Value,
Is it determined of your accumulation of things 
Or your use to others
Your existance brings.

Asset,
How others benefit from your gain
Will they reap the rewards
After your death they attain

Remembrance,
Dying alone,
Your life a living memory
Or just another faceless name
Etched in stone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 10:09 PM
Very intense and sad write Carl, but well written! A 7 for me! Wish you best! Love and hugs! Xxx D.
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 12:48 PM
- A deep, powerful and touching poem Carl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Walker  Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Nice Carl... Enjoyed... Verlena
Manassian Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Very deep write filled with meaning and truth. Thanks for your visit to my work, Carl. Very kind of you.
Fraser Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 10:25 AM
And thank you as well Eileen for your visit, its always appreciated, blessings my friend
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