The Suicide
Blood was running down his
skin hot and sticky like a
summer wind. he felt himself
slowly losing sight "is this how i
die tonight?" As his eyes rolled
back slowly into his head his
body grew cold, he was now
dead. but dont be sad although
he is gone, he is in a better
place, and his soul will live on.
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