the subject is water -4- FINAL
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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 September 04
Image: N/A

water under the
bridge ~ past wrongs can't fix life flows
free of wrongs can't fix
I'll go to pay the
water bill ~ means someone will
go to urinate
to walk on water
~ do the impossible that
which is difficult
carry fire in one
hand and water in other
hand ~ meant to deceive
throw the baby out
with the bath water ~ means junk
and jewel gets tossed
to spend money like
water ~
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