the subject is water -1-
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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 September 03
Image: N/A
if you are in deep
water ~ you're in a fix/catch
can't patch nor fix it
blowing thing/s out from
water ~ is winning and let
the loser know it
to be like oil and
water ~ whence aha moment
be a couple's fate
to cast one's bread on
water ~ whence thank you's silence
is golden ... and more
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