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The Street

The street seemed so much smaller now The grime and the smell were still the same though Engrained like the people who lived there It was the only thing that never left him She stayed at twenty-three One tough girl Christ, he still remembers the day she knocked him out Slightly concussed, he proposed to her Not bad for a twelve-year-old She couldn’t stop laughing She wasn’t marrying no wimp that day In fact, her daily ritual was knocking him down Mum, is love painful If it’s true love, it can be It was, his head was testament to that He just kept going back for more To give her, her due, she was happy to give it to him One day he told her straight. I don’t care how many times you knock me down. I’m going to be your boyfriend. He waited for the punch She kissed him He fell down again She starting laughing It felt like the greatest feeling ever They became inseparable after that Young love had conquered One day she told him she was going away I’m going with you It’s not that kind of going away Is there another kind It’s the dying kind of going away Yes, but you won't die for a long time A year the doctors said That didn’t make sense to him We’ll just have to make the most of it, she said Make the most of it The most precious year of his young life She died the way she lived. Demanding he did the best he could with his life There were times when he really struggled Times he thought of joining her The pain in his head always changed that Even in death, she got to him The years passed by He made good She would be proud of him The street seemed so much smaller now The grime and the smell were still the same though Engrained like the people who lived there It was good to be home...

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Date: 3/15/2024 1:22:00 PM
I get your message, nicely done!
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/16/2024 2:24:00 AM
Thanks, Diane.
Date: 2/29/2024 3:00:00 PM
Hello Paul Bell, I enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your evening my cfriend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/1/2024 9:54:00 AM
Hello Paul Bell, You are welcomed. Enjoy your day my friewnd. /Darlene/
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/1/2024 9:30:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene.
Date: 2/29/2024 7:52:00 AM
True love has only one meaning that is love of heart only and don't depart from loved one even after saying good bye from this earth. Beautiful poem read from you my dear friend.
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Paul Bell
Date: 2/29/2024 8:38:00 AM
Definitely, BI, I think he kept his promise.
Date: 7/22/2023 10:18:00 AM
Paul, this is fantastic! In the beginning you made me laugh but by the end I felt like weeping. It hit me the same way her "attack" hit him--like a ton of bricks! Thank you for making my day.
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Paul Bell
Date: 7/23/2023 1:08:00 AM
Hankies on the way for you, Ellen.
Date: 6/15/2023 1:24:00 PM
Is this a chapter in a book your writing? It really reads like one I especially liked the way you brought us back to that street that they grew up on. Enjoyed
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Paul Bell
Date: 7/23/2023 1:04:00 AM
Wish I had the stamina to write a book.
Date: 6/15/2023 8:30:00 AM
WoW Paul! What a poignant piece this is. A Beautiful but sad story. Nicely done. Bravo! God Bless, JB
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Paul Bell
Date: 6/15/2023 10:36:00 AM
It is a bit sad.
Date: 6/13/2023 1:04:00 PM
wow, this is SO bittersweet, deep and thoughtful. A fave for me.
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Paul Bell
Date: 6/14/2023 5:33:00 AM
It is a bit.

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