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The Stranger

Written: May 29, 2024, For Constance La France Contest "I have been a stranger in a strange land." Bible Exodus 2:22
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Stranger, I seek remote areas bridging hills and valleys—reams my barriers I aim to acquire a piece of land the locals are wary of my demand calmly smile—and bow In compliance Also, they chose to join a proactive alliance I'm not anxious without my peers I strive to learn all their culture for years their customs and slang are unclear to me tradition could provide substantial foresee. However, I will complete my quest find my path—and meet friends' request I will stay in this struggling place where everyone hates and ignores my face I shall bear myself safely I'm a nomad at heart, vainly set an impact in this foreign world I advanced out of curiosity and swirled. Through mystery, despite doubts— and future challenges sprout an intense need drives me wanting knowledge and hilarity this promise inspires me  of raw vistas with each degree a chance of discovery— and hidden truths of a magical land with some dread and anxiety, I stand usher my quest into unknown deep ruts ready to discover my secrets. Landscapes blend with peculiar sights high, misty skyscrapers, exotic flora lights— and fauna thrive in lush slopes winding waters whisper mysteries grope of archaic civilizations. every minute is an opportunity for exploration relations offer options to explore in this foreign world, my heart sore.

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Date: 6/25/2024 7:03:00 AM
Sotto, congratulations on your win in my contest, love your poem, the chosen quote and the music, Constance
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Date: 6/11/2024 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading "The Stranger" write. When one is a stranger in a far off land, one needs to make a friend. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 6/10/2024 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations Dear Sotto on your win.
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Date: 6/2/2024 10:36:00 AM
Hi Sotto, I love that music, I have also used it for a poem on here.. I felt your poem is a reflective and evocative exploration of adventure and cultural assimilation. Through vivid imagery and a contemplative tone, it captures the excitement and challenges of seeking understanding in a foreign land. The themes of curiosity, resilience, and discovery resonate deeply, making it a compelling piece that speaks to the universal human experience of exploration and the quest for meaning.
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:44:00 PM
Sotto, your beautiful, touching poem, allows one to see through the eyes of the stranger-their hopes and their fears. Wonderful music, too. This is a fave.
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:52:00 AM
SP, this is wonderful! I imagine immigrants here and everywhere trying their best to fit in and embrace the culture of a new place despite any opposition and disapproval. You truly enable us to develop a sense of empathy for the stranger in our midst.
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Date: 5/30/2024 9:22:00 AM
Dear Sotto, Ahh... Yes, the feeling of being an outsider and the courage it takes to embrace the unknown. I like how the words of bridging hills and valleys while seeking connection in a foreign land is powerful. I also love how you capture the mix of curiosity, dread, and determination. Your quest for understanding and discovery is beautifully expressed. This is a thoughtful and inspiring piece. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/29/2024 5:33:00 PM
When one leaves home or a comfort zone there's a lot to comprehend and search for. It's like a new challenge and yearning for whatever life has to offer, a change or more tasks. It's like a wilderness of confusion and exhaustion. However, with time, focus and continuity we sail on the right path eventually. Lovely one for the contest Sotto.
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Date: 5/29/2024 11:25:00 AM
nice one
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