Sotto Poet Poet Ballad

The Stranger

Written: May 29, 2024, For Constance La France Contest

"I have been a stranger in a strange land." Bible Exodus 2:22

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Stranger, I seek remote areas
bridging hills and valleys—reams my barriers
I aim to acquire a piece of land
the locals are wary of my demand
calmly smile—and bow In compliance 
Also, they chose to join a proactive alliance
I'm not anxious without my peers
I strive to learn all their culture for years
their customs and slang are unclear to me
tradition could provide substantial foresee.

However, I will complete my quest
find my path—and meet friends' request
I will stay in this struggling place
where everyone hates and ignores my face
I shall bear myself safely
I'm a nomad at heart, vainly
set an impact in this foreign world
I advanced out of curiosity and swirled.

Through mystery, despite doubts—
and future challenges sprout
an intense need drives me
wanting knowledge and hilarity
this promise inspires me 
of raw vistas with each degree
a chance of discovery—
and hidden truths of a magical land
with some dread and anxiety, I stand
usher my quest into unknown deep ruts
ready to discover my secrets. 
 
Landscapes blend with peculiar sights
high, misty skyscrapers, exotic flora lights—
and fauna thrive in lush slopes
winding waters whisper mysteries grope
of archaic civilizations. 
every minute is an opportunity for exploration
relations offer options to explore 
in this foreign world, my heart sore.

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Constance La France June 25, 2024 at 7:03 AM Sotto, congratulations on your win in my contest, love your poem, the chosen quote and the music, Constance

Paula Goldsmith June 11, 2024 at 7:47 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading "The Stranger" write. When one is a stranger in a far off land, one needs to make a friend. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Tonye George June 10, 2024 at 11:42 AM Congratulations Dear Sotto on your win.

Silent One June 2, 2024 at 10:36 AM Hi Sotto, I love that music, I have also used it for a poem on here.. I felt your poem is a reflective and evocative exploration of adventure and cultural assimilation. Through vivid imagery and a contemplative tone, it captures the excitement and challenges of seeking understanding in a foreign land. The themes of curiosity, resilience, and discovery resonate deeply, making it a compelling piece that speaks to the universal human experience of exploration and the quest for meaning.

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 1, 2024 at 9:44 PM Sotto, your beautiful, touching poem, allows one to see through the eyes of the stranger-their hopes and their fears. Wonderful music, too. This is a fave.

Duke Beaufort June 1, 2024 at 9:52 AM SP, this is wonderful! I imagine immigrants here and everywhere trying their best to fit in and embrace the culture of a new place despite any opposition and disapproval. You truly enable us to develop a sense of empathy for the stranger in our midst.

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 30, 2024 at 9:22 AM Dear Sotto, Ahh... Yes, the feeling of being an outsider and the courage it takes to embrace the unknown. I like how the words of bridging hills and valleys while seeking connection in a foreign land is powerful. I also love how you capture the mix of curiosity, dread, and determination. Your quest for understanding and discovery is beautifully expressed. This is a thoughtful and inspiring piece. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Tonye George May 29, 2024 at 5:33 PM When one leaves home or a comfort zone there's a lot to comprehend and search for. It's like a new challenge and yearning for whatever life has to offer, a change or more tasks. It's like a wilderness of confusion and exhaustion. However, with time, focus and continuity we sail on the right path eventually. Lovely one for the contest Sotto.

Jay Narain May 29, 2024 at 11:25 AM nice one