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The Strait

The Strait

~A strait betwixt two,
      denying reality…
           one’s faith…Love’s wisdom! 

   For and in honor of Brian Strand
   And Contest: Whatever

faithsenryu

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 6/9/2011 4:23:00 AM

Wonderful Senryu , deep thinking here. May I ask why you are called Moses? And it looks like you have been very busy . Good for you.Anne

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Moses. Love, Carol

Robert Ball

Date: 5/19/2011 8:05:00 AM

Moses where have you been son? Thank you for comment, your poem is great as usual and I'm here to tell you that my second book has been released and I'm going to be on a radio program on Sunday in the Northeast, So good things are happening and I will plug poetrysoup and it's members on the program so Moses keep in touch and I'll be catching up to your other poems as soon as I find the time. God bless

Don Johnson

Date: 5/18/2011 11:18:00 PM

Deeper deep the layers sleep before the suns arising great verse mate Don

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/18/2011 6:55:00 PM

I was wondering what you've been up to with your writing....ta dah!....Here it is...! You have been racking in the trophies lately! What kind of vitamins are u taking...I want some too!! ha ha. Gwendolen

John Freeman
Date: 5/18/2011 7:17:00 PM

Vitamin B-12, stimulates the brain! Smile!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/17/2011 4:48:00 PM

Interesting work that reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/16/2011 1:34:00 AM

A winning SENRYU!!! Excellente John! Your poetic skills are growing and growing and growing each day! Congrats on this write-it is outtta sight! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2011 4:47:00 PM

way to go, john. A very well deserved win!!

Cory Long

Date: 5/15/2011 8:26:00 AM

this is well written nice job. congrats on your win..cory

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/14/2011 9:39:00 PM

lovely use of contrats, moe.. happy congrst on the shining win! :) huggs

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/14/2011 8:48:00 PM

Congrats my brother on your win! Great to be on the list with you:) R.M.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/14/2011 8:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win John....thought provoking....BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2011 1:51:00 PM

So happy to see you riding high with this win, John! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/14/2011 1:33:00 PM

Congrats John!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/14/2011 1:22:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, John

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2011 12:57:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your big win in Whatever contest with these more than perfect words my friend.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv.. a great blog u posted on faith ..just commented ..

Tsotetsi Thabiso Edward

Date: 5/14/2011 8:07:00 AM

Wow you are the word master.Please read mine titled The voice in my dreams

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2011 12:58:00 AM

WEll penned, john. And a strong message.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/13/2011 3:08:00 PM

beautifully worded thought, John

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2011 1:57:00 PM

Excellent way of describing the way people deny reality, John. Faith and Love's wisdom are indeed the answers to seeing the truth. Outstanding entry for Brian's contest, my friend, and you know I'll be looking for your poem in the winner's circle. It's nice to see you posting again. Hope things are going well now. Love, Carolyn

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