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The Strait

The Strait

~A strait betwixt two,
      denying reality…
           one’s faith…Love’s wisdom! 

   For and in honor of Brian Strand
   And Contest: Whatever

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Anne Rutherford

June 9, 2011 at 4:23 AM

Wonderful Senryu , deep thinking here. May I ask why you are called Moses? And it looks like you have been very busy . Good for you.Anne

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 20, 2011 at 10:08 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Moses. Love, Carol

Robert Ball

May 19, 2011 at 8:05 AM

Moses where have you been son? Thank you for comment, your poem is great as usual and I'm here to tell you that my second book has been released and I'm going to be on a radio program on Sunday in the Northeast, So good things are happening and I will plug poetrysoup and it's members on the program so Moses keep in touch and I'll be catching up to your other poems as soon as I find the time. God bless

Don Johnson

May 18, 2011 at 11:18 PM

Deeper deep the layers sleep before the suns arising great verse mate Don

Gwendolen Song

May 18, 2011 at 6:55 PM

I was wondering what you've been up to with your writing....ta dah!....Here it is...! You have been racking in the trophies lately! What kind of vitamins are u taking...I want some too!! ha ha. Gwendolen

John Freeman

May 18, 2011 at 7:17 PM

Vitamin B-12, stimulates the brain! Smile!

Sara Kendrick

May 17, 2011 at 4:48 PM

Interesting work that reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Gwendolen Song

May 16, 2011 at 1:34 AM

A winning SENRYU!!! Excellente John! Your poetic skills are growing and growing and growing each day! Congrats on this write-it is outtta sight! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

May 15, 2011 at 4:47 PM

way to go, john. A very well deserved win!!

Cory Long

May 15, 2011 at 8:26 AM

this is well written nice job. congrats on your win..cory

Nette Onclaud

May 14, 2011 at 9:39 PM

lovely use of contrats, moe.. happy congrst on the shining win! :) huggs

Matt Hunt

May 14, 2011 at 8:48 PM

Congrats my brother on your win! Great to be on the list with you:) R.M.

Barbara Gorelick

May 14, 2011 at 8:28 PM

Congrats on your win John....thought provoking....BG

Carolyn Devonshire

May 14, 2011 at 1:51 PM

So happy to see you riding high with this win, John! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

May 14, 2011 at 1:33 PM

Congrats John!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 14, 2011 at 1:22 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, John

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 14, 2011 at 12:57 PM

Congrats Moses on your big win in Whatever contest with these more than perfect words my friend.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv.. a great blog u posted on faith ..just commented ..

Tsotetsi Thabiso Edward

May 14, 2011 at 8:07 AM

Wow you are the word master.Please read mine titled The voice in my dreams

Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2011 at 12:58 AM

WEll penned, john. And a strong message.

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 13, 2011 at 3:08 PM

beautifully worded thought, John

Carolyn Devonshire

May 13, 2011 at 1:57 PM

Excellent way of describing the way people deny reality, John. Faith and Love's wisdom are indeed the answers to seeing the truth. Outstanding entry for Brian's contest, my friend, and you know I'll be looking for your poem in the winner's circle. It's nice to see you posting again. Hope things are going well now. Love, Carolyn

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