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The story of the moon and the sun guardian

Long ago, there were two guardians, a moon guardian and a sun guardian. One day, they met at a changing post and instantly fell in love. Each time they met, they spoke, laughed, and shared secrets under the shifting skies. Their love grew stronger, and they longed to be together always, To share each other's joy, pain, and happiness. Defying the ancient rules, they crossed the forbidden wall, Causing an eclipse—the strongest and longest one ever seen. But in their union, tragedy struck: One guardian lost the sight in an eye, blinded by too much light. From that day, the Sun’s guardian decreed That they could never meet again. With heavy hearts, the Moon’s guardian agreed You may ask, "But what happened with the two guardians?" ... well, they had to say goodbye.

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Date: 2/12/2025 11:05:00 AM
"The story of the moon and the sun guardian" is a beautifully crafted and evocative poem that explores themes of forbidden love, sacrifice, and the enduring power of memory. You've created a poignant and mythical tale with a touch of celestial magic.
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Aissi Balde
Date: 2/14/2025 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words and taking the time to share your appreciation—it means a lot!
Date: 2/1/2025 3:33:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Aissi Balde
Date: 2/1/2025 5:58:00 AM
Thank you,for your warm welcome and for taking the time to read my poem. I truly appreciated :)

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