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The Story of Rain

Tyler Jones Rain the Story Contest Poem I see Rain from time to time. With pain in her eyes she can't leave behind. She knows this world is a preamble to the next. She's someone divine in a world full of rejects. Her visions of tomorrow fulfill her very soul. Knowing the next world won't be so cold. When parting from Rain I'm always filled with sorrow Knowing her new world could come tomorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/21/2011 8:09:00 AM
I love the "personification" Keep it up! Thanks Julie Heckman
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Tyler on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:40:00 PM
HI, Tyler, I enjoyed the lyrical feeling to your poem. Congratulations in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Tyler. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of constance, Tyler
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:27:00 AM
beautifully woven piece, tyler!! cheers for bagging a happy win in the contest!! : ) nette
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:23:00 PM
Many Congrats Tyler on HM in contest with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:44:00 PM
Congrats Tyler on your HM in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry .. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
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