Tyler Jones Poet Free verse

The Story of Rain

Tyler Jones
Rain the Story Contest Poem

I see Rain from time to time.
With pain in her eyes she can't leave behind.
She knows this world is a preamble to the next.
She's someone divine in a world full of rejects.
Her visions of tomorrow fulfill her very soul.
Knowing the next world won't be so cold.
When parting from Rain I'm always filled with sorrow
Knowing her new world could come tomorrow.

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Julie Heckman January 21, 2011 at 8:09 AM I love the "personification" Keep it up! Thanks Julie Heckman

Carol Sunshine Brown January 14, 2011 at 9:33 AM Congratulations Tyler on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2011 at 4:40 PM HI, Tyler, I enjoyed the lyrical feeling to your poem. Congratulations in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick January 13, 2011 at 1:38 PM Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Tyler. Always, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta January 13, 2011 at 6:43 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of constance, Tyler

Nette Onclaud January 13, 2011 at 3:27 AM beautifully woven piece, tyler!! cheers for bagging a happy win in the contest!! : ) nette

Dr Hitendra Mehta January 12, 2011 at 9:23 PM Many Congrats Tyler on HM in contest with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 12, 2011 at 8:44 PM Congrats Tyler on your HM in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry .. enjoy your very special honor with luv..