The Story of My Life

It just passes by
It's like a leaf in the wind
How I shake like it
At the thought of it ending
The time of my life I spend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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HAYNES Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 11:12 PM
All I can say is I enjoyed it, time does go by swiftly
Miller Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 3:54 AM
Very nice tanka, congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 3:22 PM
The leaf metaphor I really liked. Thanks for submitting and congrats in my contest
Agustin Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 2:23 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Cunningham Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 12:24 PM
Hopefully not too soon Caitlin, welcome to poetry soup. Tom
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