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The Story of My Life

It just passes by It's like a leaf in the wind How I shake like it At the thought of it ending The time of my life I spend

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Date: 3/23/2025 11:12:00 PM
All I can say is I enjoyed it, time does go by swiftly
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Date: 3/23/2025 3:54:00 AM
Very nice tanka, congratulations
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Date: 3/22/2025 3:22:00 PM
The leaf metaphor I really liked. Thanks for submitting and congrats in my contest
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Date: 3/21/2025 2:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/17/2025 12:24:00 PM
Hopefully not too soon Caitlin, welcome to poetry soup. Tom
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