The Story of Man

At rising dawn of man we were acquainted with the flame
Then our clockwork devices channeled nature's force made tame
But there is one more energy which flies in a realm higher
Once love is harnessed we shall have again discovered fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rose  Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 6:08 AM
Man always did have a fascination with fire . Another great write, Have a great day
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November 9, 2018 at 10:26 AM
thanks :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Nice write, Carolyn!
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January 18, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Thank you!
Martin Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 12:15 PM
If only there were technology to harness love. Congrats on your win Carolyn! :-)
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January 13, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Thank you!
Amerasb Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 5:22 AM
hustles
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January 11, 2017 at 4:37 AM
Indeed! Love this, Carolyn ... may love's fire warm the world! Keep up the great work! :-)
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January 11, 2017 at 9:04 AM
Thank you! Love has a deep power that we only mildly grasp.
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January 11, 2017 at 3:01 AM
Thought inspiring. Very nice. Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann
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January 11, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Thank you!
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