The Story of Couple Under the Red Umbrella

Two souls being impatient of their loyalty For there was a constant fear of this cruel society Decades were spend only in the waiting of one another Cursed is the situation which caused the separation of two lovers,making them suffer But today nothing matters, no sunset, no imagery For my life partner is standing right infront if me Shh!No space is left for words neither you need to say any stuff Your silent lips have already said more than enough This rain symbolizes all the lonely tears the soul has cried waiting for its partner With every single passing day, the waiting becoming harder and harder O my lover, you tell me what else was I suppose to do All these years of waiting, yet this lonely heart only beats for you Hiding under a red umbrella are two souls who are in love Their heart synchronize as one, angels marveling at the scene from above For their beats have a perfect harmony To love each other unconditionally and for an eternity Today none of us wait for its destiny For it is here, mines with her, and hers with me. We no longer look for comfort, nor chase for our dreams For today under this umbrella, everything look so perfect and serene Not even hesitating for a second I pulled her close, Her angelic eyes looking directly at me and realising that yeah I love her the most My gaze was on her lovely face and at last her soft lips met mine Fate was bound to bring us close, for God couldn't write separation in a love so divine
The rhyming scheme is aabb ccdd eeff and so on 5 Nov 2018 For the contest" The Red Umbrella" Sponsor " Eve Roper"
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Date: 2/25/2019 9:14:00 AM
You are such a great weaver of words :)
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Date: 12/20/2018 7:33:00 AM
- Just a little greeting from Norway - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2018 10:07:00 AM
Um ,I am not a Christian but I do appreciate your comment and also wish you a very happy Christmas and a really nice new year, good luck
Date: 12/3/2018 3:25:00 PM
Very good I like that poem it has a lot of meaning as well.
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Date: 12/1/2018 5:09:00 AM
Very intricate and bold, a perfect demonstration in words of today's society and how they overlook such beauty
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Date: 11/17/2018 1:11:00 PM
what a beautiful love story Faraz:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:48:00 AM
- Congratulations, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2018 11:16:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Faraz. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/12/2018 11:10:00 AM
Lovely verse Faraz, well written. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 11/7/2018 1:07:00 PM
Lovers write their own destiny empowered by a nameless attraction! So sweet and beautifully genuine all that happen on path of Love! A wonderful rendition of sweet love under a red umbrella! Best of luck in the contest Faraz.. deepest wishes.
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Date: 11/5/2018 10:08:00 PM
You have expressed the kind of love destined to be together no matter the obstacles. Very beautifully written Faraz. I hope to see this on the winner's list my friend! ; )
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Date: 11/5/2018 6:31:00 PM
Your love story too had a wonderful happy ending. You are such a sensitive poet! A charming story
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Date: 11/5/2018 3:05:00 AM
- A beautiful story on true love, Faraz :) - Best wishes in the contest ... definitely a winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/4/2018 1:38:00 PM
Simply... Lovely. Best of luck for the contest.
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