Angie Thomas Poet Rhyme

The Story of a Lonely Girls Life

The tears have come, and the tears have gone,
The tears of regret, the tears of remorse,
The ache is only what’s left,
The ache of guilt, of being alone.

Loneliness surrounds me,
To be alone in a crowded room,
To hears peals of laughter bounce,
Bounce off the walls I have built around me.

With my own hands I built these walls,
Walls that entrap me, keep me abound,
No matter how hard I try,
I cannot pull them down at all.

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Len Gasun February 22, 2015 at 3:57 AM Oh, this is an awesome poignant write that carried me away my very dear friend Angie. I love your poem so much and I'm sending you my biggest hug on this precious gem. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots, Leonora Angie Thomas May 15, 2015 at 4:18 AM thank you Leonora from the lovely comment. it means a lot :)

Skat A February 14, 2015 at 1:17 AM very deep Angie, :)Have yourself a sweet valentine's Day. ~SKAT LOVE~ Angie Thomas February 14, 2015 at 1:47 AM Aww thank you Skat...you too. :)

Paul Callus February 13, 2015 at 8:30 AM This is very expressive, Angie. Tears have come and gone, but do allow the wound to heal. The scar will remain, but you do not need to be stuck in the middle of nowhere....time to strip off the gown of blame and start afresh. Hope and faith will surely give you a helping hand. // paul

Constance La France February 12, 2015 at 12:04 PM Angie, your poem is so full of pain and grief, I felt every sad emotion you so expertly captured in your words and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~ Angie Thomas February 12, 2015 at 1:01 PM Thank you broken wings... :)

Jan Allison November 15, 2014 at 4:20 AM Loneliness is so hard to cope with - the lines about being in a crowded room speak volumes Angie - fabulous write my friend:-) hugs jan xx Angie Thomas November 15, 2014 at 7:18 AM Wow thank you for the visit and positive feedback Jan :)