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The Story of a Lonely Girls Life

The tears have come, and the tears have gone, The tears of regret, the tears of remorse, The ache is only what’s left, The ache of guilt, of being alone. Loneliness surrounds me, To be alone in a crowded room, To hears peals of laughter bounce, Bounce off the walls I have built around me. With my own hands I built these walls, Walls that entrap me, keep me abound, No matter how hard I try, I cannot pull them down at all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/22/2015 3:57:00 AM
Oh, this is an awesome poignant write that carried me away my very dear friend Angie. I love your poem so much and I'm sending you my biggest hug on this precious gem. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/15/2015 4:18:00 AM
thank you Leonora from the lovely comment. it means a lot :)
Date: 2/14/2015 1:17:00 AM
very deep Angie, :)Have yourself a sweet valentine's Day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:47:00 AM
Aww thank you Skat...you too. :)
Date: 2/13/2015 8:30:00 AM
This is very expressive, Angie. Tears have come and gone, but do allow the wound to heal. The scar will remain, but you do not need to be stuck in the middle of nowhere....time to strip off the gown of blame and start afresh. Hope and faith will surely give you a helping hand. // paul
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Date: 2/12/2015 12:04:00 PM
Angie, your poem is so full of pain and grief, I felt every sad emotion you so expertly captured in your words and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 2/12/2015 1:01:00 PM
Thank you broken wings... :)
Date: 11/15/2014 4:20:00 AM
Loneliness is so hard to cope with - the lines about being in a crowded room speak volumes Angie - fabulous write my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:18:00 AM
Wow thank you for the visit and positive feedback Jan :)

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