Tania Kitchin Poet Rhyme

The Stormy Sea

rough ocean waves
        crashing sounds on the granite rocks
      water rising, filling up nearby caves
        winds raise nearby boat docks
  to fall and crumble in pieces into the sea
  as the seagulls and cormorants on the docks flee 
    to the seawater to swim free
  waves crash on granite rocks as sea debris engraves

6/18/19

Contest: Writing Challenge 1, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Constance La France June 30, 2019 at 7:08 PM Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for the delay in visiting ~ Tania Kitchin June 30, 2019 at 8:38 PM Thank you Constance! :)

Jan Allison June 30, 2019 at 6:33 PM fabulous imagery Tania I especially love that final line, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Tania Kitchin June 30, 2019 at 8:38 PM Thank you Jan! :)

Susan Ashley June 25, 2019 at 9:45 PM Your dramatic imagery highlights the savage beauty of Nature, Tania. She is powerful and so is your poetic pen. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Tania Kitchin June 26, 2019 at 4:55 AM Thank you Susan for your kind comments! :)

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2019 at 11:58 AM I really like this, Tania. Be seeing you in several days. On my way to my dad's funeral soon and it's in another state. Congrats for your win, dear. Tania Kitchin June 25, 2019 at 4:21 PM Thank you Andrea, so sorry about your Dad, my condolences to you and your family.

Richard Lamoureux June 24, 2019 at 10:01 AM Well done! Tania Kitchin June 24, 2019 at 12:01 PM Thank you Richard!

Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2019 at 2:30 PM Love this, Tania! Oh how each wave has a causal effect! Tania Kitchin June 23, 2019 at 4:25 PM Thank you Kim! :)

Gershon Wolf June 18, 2019 at 9:34 PM This meets the challenge so seamlessly. You can hardly tell that you were required to use certain words. G.L. in the contest, Tania. :) gw Tania Kitchin June 19, 2019 at 6:54 PM Thank you Gershon for your kind comments! :)