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The Stormy Sea

rough ocean waves crashing sounds on the granite rocks water rising, filling up nearby caves winds raise nearby boat docks to fall and crumble in pieces into the sea as the seagulls and cormorants on the docks flee to the seawater to swim free waves crash on granite rocks as sea debris engraves 6/18/19 Contest: Writing Challenge 1, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Constance La France

Date: 6/30/2019 7:08:00 PM

Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for the delay in visiting ~

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/30/2019 8:38:00 PM

Thank you Constance! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/30/2019 6:33:00 PM

fabulous imagery Tania I especially love that final line, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/30/2019 8:38:00 PM

Thank you Jan! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/25/2019 9:45:00 PM

Your dramatic imagery highlights the savage beauty of Nature, Tania. She is powerful and so is your poetic pen. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/26/2019 4:55:00 AM

Thank you Susan for your kind comments! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2019 11:58:00 AM

I really like this, Tania. Be seeing you in several days. On my way to my dad's funeral soon and it's in another state. Congrats for your win, dear.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/25/2019 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, so sorry about your Dad, my condolences to you and your family.