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The Stormy Sea

              rough ocean waves
        crashing sounds on the granite rocks
      water rising, filling up nearby caves
        winds raise nearby boat docks
  to fall and crumble in pieces into the sea
  as the seagulls and cormorants on the docks flee 
    to the seawater to swim free
  waves crash on granite rocks as sea debris engraves

6/18/19

Contest: Writing Challenge 1, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 6/30/2019 7:08:00 PM
Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for the delay in visiting ~
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/30/2019 8:38:00 PM
Thank you Constance! :)
Date: 6/30/2019 6:33:00 PM
fabulous imagery Tania I especially love that final line, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2019 8:38:00 PM
Thank you Jan! :)
Date: 6/25/2019 9:45:00 PM
Your dramatic imagery highlights the savage beauty of Nature, Tania. She is powerful and so is your poetic pen. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/26/2019 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Susan for your kind comments! :)
Date: 6/25/2019 11:58:00 AM
I really like this, Tania. Be seeing you in several days. On my way to my dad's funeral soon and it's in another state. Congrats for your win, dear.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/25/2019 4:21:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, so sorry about your Dad, my condolences to you and your family.
Date: 6/24/2019 10:01:00 AM
Well done!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2019 12:01:00 PM
Thank you Richard!
Date: 6/23/2019 2:30:00 PM
Love this, Tania! Oh how each wave has a causal effect!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2019 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Kim! :)
Date: 6/23/2019 8:43:00 AM
I came here hoping to ask you to read my latest poem and re-read your poem. How fickle this soup is. I got so many views and comments with my poem but you deserve so much more. Your poem makes mine a midget compared to yours. I hope you will be placed high because you deserve it. I only deserve an n/a really.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2019 8:47:00 AM
Victor, I appreciate your kind words and support. You my friend are a talented poet and I enjoy reading your beautifully penned gems, they are so heartfelt with beautiful imagery. Thank you! :)
Date: 6/19/2019 12:20:00 AM
I lost many comments including yours, with that soup crash. Glad you have geared up and composed a beautiful piece for the contest. Deserves a high placement. Hugs.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/19/2019 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Victor for your kind words! Hugs! :)
Date: 6/18/2019 9:34:00 PM
This meets the challenge so seamlessly. You can hardly tell that you were required to use certain words. G.L. in the contest, Tania. :) gw
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/19/2019 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Gershon for your kind comments! :)