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The Storm

The Storm Black rimmed skies, Clouds with no lining of silver, Gusts of wind, Trees protesting, With a dance on the horizon. Rumblings of thunder, Flashes of lightening, Animals and humans, Caught up in the melee, While scurrying to the shelter, Of their de-roofed abodes. A deluge of wetness, Spattering on the pavement, Cascading into drains, Loaded with the debris, From a disenchanted metropolis. Steering-happy drivers, Punishing crying jalopies, Meandering through the gridlock, They almost knock down children, Glorying in the rain. But the end, was also the beginning, The damage done: great! Before any got home, The sun was up smiling, In adulation for the rain, For a job well done.

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Date: 12/6/2023 6:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/6/2018 7:28:00 PM
Nice use of stanza!
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Date: 10/9/2018 10:09:00 PM
In adulation for the rain- well done
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Date: 10/10/2018 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Maytab. I appreciate. Cheers, Sandison.
Date: 9/21/2016 9:22:00 AM
Good imagery there Sandison on your nature poem with a nice hint of humor!:)
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Date: 10/16/2016 4:15:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl. Please feel free to comment on my poems. I will go through some of your poems. I see that you are quite prolific.

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