The Storm

On a rough and rocky shore,
Standing barefoot by the sea;
She listens to the water
Crash against her memory.
Longing for his arms again,
Safe from harm in bitter cold;
She is hoping that the wind
Won't confirm the stories told.

Desperate prayers are always heard
In a raging winter storm.
And his tears will blend with hers,
When they both are free and warm.
She will go to him she swears,
If he can't come back to her.
Together meant forever;
Lifeless in the things that were.

All her thoughts are filled with grief.
All her dreams have disappeared.
Reaching hopelessly for love,
In the mist of what is feared.
Waves are crashing on the rocks.
Wind is blowing through her hair.
As she hears the voice of God,
Come in answer to her prayer.

"THERE IS NOTHING GAINED IN DEATH."
"HE IS GONE BUT YOU MUST STAY."

She turns from the lonely shore.
But, the storm sweeps her away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 8:44 AM
a great poem! Lovely and a wonderful share. A 7 definitely
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:14 PM
oh my gosh, that last line is a real twist on the story. So she is gonna stay but she still gets swept away.. Wow, this was very good to read. It kept my interest and was a well crafted poem, my friend.
Nehls Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I surely do appreciate that. I'm so happy you got it. My idea was that these souls were meant to be together and her decision to stay is what brought them together again. I just figured that thee Lord works in mysterious ways. Your comments and insight is always welcome, my friend.... Robert.
Sergi Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 5:34 PM
Hi Robert: We all go through Storms in Life and I was happy to share my Storm with yours. A beautiful write!
Nehls Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:48 AM
Thank you so much, Ralph. Happy you liked this one, my friend.... Robert.
Lindley Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 3:21 PM
A fantastic write my friend. Life is often a storm. Yet we live for when it is not. Says so very much and does so in a way that admits reality isn't always gentle or kind. BBBravoooooo!!!!!!!!!
Nehls Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:44 AM
Yes, Robert, life has many storms and putting our faith in God that his will be done is comforting. Glad you liked this one my friend.... Robert.
Gibson Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 10:27 AM
Wonderful write, Robert. I see in it the importance of not taking our destiny into our own hands but leaving it to God. He knows best.
Nehls Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Thanks for reading this one, Faye. Always happy to read your comments, my friend.... Robert.
Manassian Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:44 AM
This is a gripping story, Robert. Sometimes...it is so tempting just to give in...But we must live to fight another day...Thanks for your visit to my first poem. That was very kind of you.
Nehls Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Hi, Eileen. Nice to hear from you. Thanks so much for your kind comments, my friend.... Robert.
Davis Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:10 AM
Robert This is so powerful and deep with a great message that touches the heart and makes the reader think. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Sorrowed Past poem. Yes, this is a true poem.
Nehls Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:35 AM
I'm very happy you liked this one, Robin. I am grateful for your kind comments.... Robert.
Andresen Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 5:44 AM
- Robert, a heartbreaking...touching poem - but, such is life - Skillfully written as always ! - (I've been on vacation .... sorry not read your poems .... but home now :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Nehls Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Hope you had a good vacation, Anne Lise, and thanks for stopping by to read. Always nice to hear from you, my friend.... Robert.
Callus Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 4:06 AM
This is very touching, Robert. Excellent take on the inner and outer storms. We have to leave our destiny in His hands. Great ending! // paul
Nehls Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Thank you, Paul. Glad you liked this one... Robert.
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:41 AM
oh a heartbreaking poem with such a dramatic ending
Nehls Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 9:28 AM
Thank so much, Jan. Love hearing from you.... Robert.
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