The Storm

searchlight gives me chills
past the wall into town spills…
fear in my heart fills
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 8:13 AM
Ominous!
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February 28, 2011 at 3:39 AM
Great haiku. It's not easy to rhyme haiku but you've done it here. You've painted a very vivid picture. N :)
Konos Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 8:53 PM
These 15 words could easily be a novel. I see castaways hiding low in a rowboat with the good guys (who are really the bad guys) drawing nearer to them. And they but mere children are scared beyond belief. Likely nothing like you intended but.....so interesting...Thanks
Mehta Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Nice storm with analogy and the rhyming too,
Poet Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Nice Haiku with rhyming.Enjoyed---kashinath
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