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The Storm

searchlight gives me chills past the wall into town spills… fear in my heart fills

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/4/2011 8:13:00 AM
Ominous!
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:39:00 AM
Great haiku. It's not easy to rhyme haiku but you've done it here. You've painted a very vivid picture. N :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:53:00 PM
These 15 words could easily be a novel. I see castaways hiding low in a rowboat with the good guys (who are really the bad guys) drawing nearer to them. And they but mere children are scared beyond belief. Likely nothing like you intended but.....so interesting...Thanks
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Date: 2/27/2011 6:38:00 PM
Nice storm with analogy and the rhyming too,
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Date: 2/27/2011 6:21:00 PM
Nice Haiku with rhyming.Enjoyed---kashinath
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