Danielle Curl Poet Free verse

The Storm

Thunder Rolls, my soul echoes its sentiment.
My Spirit is dark and gloomy like the sky.
A memory strikes, an illuminating moment.
My heart fissures painfully, 
I close my eyes against the agony, but the vision is vivid.
I see lightning flash behind my eyes
The rain begins to pour...

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Stephan McBride July 23, 2011 at 10:15 PM wonderful imagery, loved it

David Byrne February 28, 2010 at 9:04 PM Nice piece of Romantic poetry well done!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 24, 2010 at 12:28 PM Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight.. nice free verse style ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

Jared Pickett February 24, 2010 at 8:02 AM Good imagery... Excellent.....:JP}

Danielle Curl February 24, 2010 at 8:01 AM Thanks Carol, I'll keep that in mind. I've been looking for a place to post, I'm liking this site so far. Susan, thank you, it was a vivid feeling.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2010 at 3:54 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Danielle. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Susan Palli February 23, 2010 at 10:59 PM So vivid as you say