The Stirring of His Water

In a pool of clear water.
Look what you can see.
Walking on the bed of the waters shore.
As sure as you can see!

The waters of his word, the waters of his blessed!
Come pouring forth from the embankments!
And people are walking and saying he's blessed!!!

Whatever is your problem.
Whatever it is he says rest!
When it is your time I will rise up
and you I will bless!!

You will know when I am stirring 
and waiting for the rest.
But when my foot touches the water 
nothing will keep you from my best!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 19, 2015 at 6:34 PM
Laudia:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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January 31, 2015 at 6:52 AM
Narcissus retold in the version of Oscar Wilde,Paulo Coelhio,Aurel Rau and you...troubling the deep waters .Impressive verses.Congrat. Best regards
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January 31, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Laudia, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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January 31, 2015 at 12:59 AM
Hi Laudia, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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January 30, 2015 at 7:10 AM
- Crystal clear water - A beautiful poem, Laudia - Welcome to P-Soup! - // Anne-Lise :)
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