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The Steak Out

There once was a fellow named Jack On meat he never would snack Vegetables only No ribs or baloney But he sure loved those Big Macs!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2015 3:45:00 PM

ahhh, I see you made the change. This is so good, Joseph!!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2015 1:06:00 PM

Lovely and witty write, Joseph! Big Macs must be irresistible! All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2015 10:43:00 PM

Excellent one. Just make line two a bit better by saying "on meat he never would snack" I think it is a really cute one.

Joseph May
Date: 5/2/2015 6:30:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

MD Johnson

Date: 5/1/2015 11:28:00 AM

This describes a friend of mine by a different name. Enjoyed.

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/1/2015 9:27:00 AM

The rhyme and rhythm are perfect and the story line flows with a snappy beat. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2015 2:33:00 AM

ha ha ha:-) Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/30/2015 11:30:00 PM

Good one, Joseph, :~)