The Steak Out

There once was a fellow named Jack
 On meat he never would  snack
 Vegetables only
 No ribs or baloney
 But he sure  loved  those Big Macs!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 3:45 PM
ahhh, I see you made the change. This is so good, Joseph!!
Callus Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Lovely and witty write, Joseph! Big Macs must be irresistible! All the best. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Excellent one. Just make line two a bit better by saying "on meat he never would snack" I think it is a really cute one.
May Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 6:30 AM
Thanks Andrea
Johnson Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 11:28 AM
This describes a friend of mine by a different name. Enjoyed.
Pinet Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 9:27 AM
The rhyme and rhythm are perfect and the story line flows with a snappy beat. Emile.
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 2:33 AM
ha ha ha:-) Hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 11:30 PM
Good one, Joseph, :~)
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