The Stars Spoke Right To Me

She looks up at big brother
She looks up at the sky
"You can't even reach the stars
So how in the world will I?"

He kneels down by his sister
And drops his voice down low
"Do you want to hear a secret?
But only you and I can know"

Her eyes and teeth show big and white
And she holds out her little pinky
"Tell me! Tell me! I wanna hear!
And I promise you can trust me!"

He chuckles and puts on a grin
And sets her on his knee
"Okay so first you have to know
That the stars spoke right to me

Before you were even born
Shooting stars fell down towards me
They told me something really special-
That anyone can touch them if they reach

They said it may be hard
But can happen if you try
They said you don't need to be tall
In order to touch the sky

They taught me how and said I'd show you
One day-- I guess that's today
So close your eyes and dream real big
Soon you'll be in outer space."


April 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/9/2010 12:44:00 PM
Just precious and I hope your little sis loved it! Light & Love
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Date: 5/7/2010 8:34:00 PM
Hey, Are you on FaceBook? Email me when you can..andersonjimmy19@yahoo.com..send me a friend request, k? hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 5/1/2010 10:43:00 AM
Very nice. Your writing style is simular to my own. I like how you paint a story.
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Date: 4/30/2010 4:07:00 PM
Hey Destiny! Thnx for your comments..later Jimmy
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Date: 4/30/2010 9:59:00 AM
very nice write and thanks for your kind comments will let you know how it works out for my son rhanks and have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 4/29/2010 9:00:00 PM
nice one, a delight full read, taking your sweet bro. to the stars,..p.d.
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:39:00 PM
very, very beautifully written! you are my newest fav poet!
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Date: 4/29/2010 3:30:00 PM
thats special. keep that dream open and make it even bigger it will be in your hands. wonderful write.the stars are a dreams mate. -Always&Forever Lynette
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