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The Stars Spoke Right To Me

She looks up at big brother She looks up at the sky "You can't even reach the stars So how in the world will I?" He kneels down by his sister And drops his voice down low "Do you want to hear a secret? But only you and I can know" Her eyes and teeth show big and white And she holds out her little pinky "Tell me! Tell me! I wanna hear! And I promise you can trust me!" He chuckles and puts on a grin And sets her on his knee "Okay so first you have to know That the stars spoke right to me Before you were even born Shooting stars fell down towards me They told me something really special- That anyone can touch them if they reach They said it may be hard But can happen if you try They said you don't need to be tall In order to touch the sky They taught me how and said I'd show you One day-- I guess that's today So close your eyes and dream real big Soon you'll be in outer space." April 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/9/2010 12:44:00 PM
Just precious and I hope your little sis loved it! Light & Love
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Date: 5/7/2010 8:34:00 PM
Hey, Are you on FaceBook? Email me when you can..andersonjimmy19@yahoo.com..send me a friend request, k? hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 5/1/2010 10:43:00 AM
Very nice. Your writing style is simular to my own. I like how you paint a story.
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Date: 4/30/2010 4:07:00 PM
Hey Destiny! Thnx for your comments..later Jimmy
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Date: 4/30/2010 9:59:00 AM
very nice write and thanks for your kind comments will let you know how it works out for my son rhanks and have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 4/29/2010 9:00:00 PM
nice one, a delight full read, taking your sweet bro. to the stars,..p.d.
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:39:00 PM
very, very beautifully written! you are my newest fav poet!
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Date: 4/29/2010 3:30:00 PM
thats special. keep that dream open and make it even bigger it will be in your hands. wonderful write.the stars are a dreams mate. -Always&Forever Lynette
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