The Stars Are Mine Tonight

I guide my body,
but my soul I do not.
My mind.
My feelings.
They've slowly broken apart.

The darkness screams at me,
trying to reel me in.
"they're gone," they say.
"you're nothing but pitty and sin."

Though most think it's hard to step foot in this place,
it takes true strength to find another way.

As the black swallows me whole,
I see a million bright lights.
I lay there in my sorrow,
and know the stars are mine tonight.

Somehow they -- uniquely twinkling --
take my feelings on adventures to slow my breathing.

They strongly look through me,
and have my mind soaked
with things like courage, and happiness, and hope.

I lay there for hours until their vivid wisdom fades.
the dreadful transition of night to day.

When the sun gradually peaks over the horizon,
I notice the pain in my hand from clenching my knife.
But as the light shines upon me,
the only feeling I have is the feeling of life.

I stand face to face with the greatest star of all.
Feeding off of its power, I break down my wall.

The sun shows me the paths that I have to choose from,
but it's up to me to choose the right one.

I'm ready to cut ties with the sadness I hold.
I shall live my life right and pick the right way to go.

I'm eager for night to fall,
to show them that they were right.
They all found their way.
The stars are mine tonight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 5, 2015 at 10:49 PM
MERCEDES* I enjoyed reading this poem, Thank you for sharing. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Taylor Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 6:13 PM
Congrats, Mercedes. Excellent write. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
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January 31, 2012 at 3:30 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Mercedes! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in Susan's "Little Viewed Jewels" contest Mercedes. Love, Carol
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January 31, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations well done x
Young Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Thank you!
Scholtz Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:52 AM
congratulations on your win Mercedes. Elizabeth
Young Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Thank you <3
Williams Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:45 AM
Mercedes congrats on your win..David
Young Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Thank you! Means a lot!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:27 AM
congrats Mercedes on a lovely win in the contest.. awesome words..luv..
Young Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:22 AM
Thank you :D
Quigley Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on your win Mercedes and welcome to Poetry Soup. Look forward to reading more of your poems in the future.
Young Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:21 AM
Thanks!!
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 5:25 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mercedes. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Young Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:21 AM
Thank you very much! You are very nice. It means a lot!
Davis Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 12:39 PM
A deep, insightful write :-)
Young Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 12:53 PM
thank you. (:
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