Sai Lin Lip Poet Free verse

The Stars

The stars
Looking like my mother's eyes
Blinking meaningfully
Shining with warmth
Sparkling with love
Clear and soothing
Bright are the stars tonight
And so once, those of my mother's eyes
When I suddenly thought of
The happy days together

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Gershon Wolf October 17, 2021 at 7:38 PM You have a very pleasing poetic style, I think, Sai Lin. Write on, please! Thank you, Gershon Sai Lin Lip October 17, 2021 at 8:46 PM Thank you

Darlene De Beaulieu October 17, 2021 at 12:04 PM Hello Sai Lin Lip, I like the way you combined this poem with the stars and your mother. Blessing my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 18, 2021 at 11:42 AM Hello Sai Lin Lip. youare welcome. Blessings. Sai Lin Lip October 17, 2021 at 8:47 PM Thank you.