The Stars

The stars Looking like my mother's eyes Blinking meaningfully Shining with warmth Sparkling with love Clear and soothing Bright are the stars tonight And so once, those of my mother's eyes When I suddenly thought of The happy days together

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/17/2021 7:38:00 PM

You have a very pleasing poetic style, I think, Sai Lin. Write on, please! Thank you, Gershon

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 10/17/2021 8:46:00 PM

Thank you

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/17/2021 12:04:00 PM

Hello Sai Lin Lip, I like the way you combined this poem with the stars and your mother. Blessing my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2021 11:42:00 AM

Hello Sai Lin Lip. youare welcome. Blessings.

Sai Lin Lip
Date: 10/17/2021 8:47:00 PM

Thank you.