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The Stars

The stars Stars, Twinkling lights, Decorating the heavens, Such a lovely sight, Stars.

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Date: 4/16/2009 11:48:00 AM

Yes, they are. You fit a lot into this concise form for an uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind words on my footle. Keep on writing! Karen

John Heck

Date: 1/26/2009 3:50:00 PM

Such a beautiful Cinquain. I love gazing at the stars at night - so peaceful and dreamy. This poem captured their wondrous essence. Peace always, John

Saif Khan

Date: 1/21/2009 6:05:00 PM

nice poem maam every word beautiful

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/20/2009 3:39:00 PM

Great cinquain. A tough form I grew up close to the city and I know what Chris means. I moved upstate New York about 15 years ago and also found the stars. Lovely write! Love, Robin

Jen H.

Date: 1/20/2009 1:58:00 PM

Nice poem Maryam, short and sweet. Thanks for all of your comments! lots of love, Jenny

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/20/2009 3:02:00 AM

one of my most favorite sights, beautiful. love, Kristin

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/19/2009 6:24:00 PM

When I was a boy in Jamaica I would always marveled at the stars, but after moving to New York it was nearly impossible to see any because of pollution. Now I am in the south they have magically reappeared. This poem works well because it brings back memories. Good job sister.

Judy Riley

Date: 1/19/2009 4:13:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, well written Cinquain, thanks for sharing. Judy Riley