Lena Townsend Poet Couplet

The Stars

I can’t seem to find the words to properly express
My love for nature at its best

I think if I could describe one part
My favorite would be the stars

Like diamonds they sparkle and shine
Lighting the way to heaven divine

Only for one moment a cloud passes by 
You know they are there though they hide

The moon it hangs in wait all through the night
At dawn the sun brings us daylight

Again the stars go away to hide 
You know they are waiting for the night

A Universe of stars and planets too
A miraculous and romantic view

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Bianca Reyes April 5, 2009 at 11:32 PM hi there Lolita. I love the stars, they are truly captivating. I really like this poem. And thank you for commenting on my poem. More power to you. ~Love, Andy

Angela Crabtree June 13, 2008 at 8:42 AM Yes, yes. The stars and the night will cure any ache. I was mesmerized by this, and will put it in my favorites. Much love, Ivy

Gary Jones June 12, 2008 at 8:32 AM Excellent observations in this one. I to am a fan of the heavens and what they represent in our lives and those of the past. East evening until dust I search for the great Goddess in the sky and of course the God is above us during the day. Excellent. ~Peace~Gar

Des Juan Richardson June 12, 2008 at 7:31 AM Great piece Lolita. The stars in the sky are truly a magnificent creation, very calming and symbolizing endless possibilities. I enjoy this piece. ~Des Juan

Des Juan Richardson June 12, 2008 at 7:30 AM Great piece Lolita. The stars in the sky are truly a magnificent creation, very calming and symbolizing endless possibilities. I enjoy this piece. ~Des Juan

Kristin Reynolds June 11, 2008 at 6:39 PM What could give more to ponder than a sky silled with stars? It is one of my most favorite things to do...lay down and look into heaven...a beautiful poem. Blessings, Kristin XO

Michael Degenhardt June 11, 2008 at 12:08 PM Yes, a view that truly evokes romance at its best. Lovely imagery in this as you bring one perspective of the stars to life for the readers. Very well written couplet form. Awesome as always. Michael