---The Stark Horizon

the stark horizon
fills with sapphire night
tears fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 3:30 PM
reading this one again... it is deep and beautiful..pd
Turner Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 7:03 PM
UMM SAD AND BORING SORRY BUT TRUE
A   Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 7:21 PM
Hi!D.G. how are you??.. I'm back and ready to POET & ROLL... Love the deep image... never seen such a sad image at night.. or is it tragedy... still enjoyed,..p.d.
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:26 AM
I'm back to see this one again.....and also to thank you so much for the win in your Unreal (ha ha) contest.....the win was "surrearl...............but I'm thrilled you liked that poem! I constantly learn from you what to do with my poetry...and to win your contest means a lot!! THANKS!
Winter Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 8:34 AM
I think those are my tears. Beautiful haiku Debbie gal, really, you are an amazing poet. A warm thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Most grateful for the awesome surprise, truly. Love and hugs, shar xoxo
Peranteau Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 8:28 AM
The thought here may be a bit bleek dear poet, yet the Haiku is quite awesome ! Have a great week Debbie ! much love, james
La France Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 6:56 AM
A beautiful poem, Debbie, and thanks for my placement in your contest, I am very honored~~
Mehta Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Quite emotional and sentimental, Deb
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Great haiku, Deb. YOu have grown much with this form!
Gelb Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 3:56 PM
Nice poem.
Campi Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Thanks for going back and reading my work. I really like †he poem you have posted here "--- The stark horizin" It is powerful and overflows with emotion.
Poet Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 8:26 AM
Gloomy picture of night.Nice Haiku.Thanks for your inspiring comments at my pages---kashinath
Richards Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 7:24 AM
So filled with "mood"..... wow !
Sweetheart Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 6:47 AM
emotional picture painted in your words of Haiku Debbie... vibrant and visual luv..
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