The Star of David

The star of David twinkling since eternity blessing Israel
Placed tenth 1409 SENRYU Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 8:09 PM
Great senryu. Congratulations Vandana on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 7:53 PM
Congratulations on your win
Sharma Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 8:43 PM
Thank you
Guptar Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 11:44 PM
Congratulations, poet friend, on your win in this contest with a remarkable Senryu on the star of David. Wishing you a blessed weekend.
Sharma Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 12:03 AM
Thank you.
Watts Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 5:05 AM
Hi Dr Vandana Well done on a nice senryu Keep shining Cheers Christine
Sharma Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 1:30 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Sharma Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Thank you
Achara Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 10:09 PM
Congratulations on you placement in the senyru contest. Twinkle on!.
Sharma Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 11:33 PM
I guess the star of David has blessed me as well!!
Sharma Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 10:25 PM
Thank you. Very unexpected win though!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 1:42 PM
Nice one. I see your note to Sara. Too bad the world is so filled with hate.
Sharma Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 8:06 PM
!!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 4:13 PM
excellent...should do well in the contest...wishing you a blessed evening, Sara
Sharma Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 10:45 PM
Thanks for your kind words. But, I know this won't make the cut, as the world is still not ready to face the truth!
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