The Star

This beautiful angel is a star 
 Twinkling above me, I think she is near the sky
 She radiates endless cheers and smiles
 My soul is whole, part of it the sound of a guitar 
 I am whole, and my joy is infinite 
 In love with her in, out, and all
 I think she carries the name of Lilies 
 Perfect dance and she can make me instantly fall
 Love is a miracle and when it comes to her and me
 The whole universe is just tiny and small
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 29, 2014 at 10:47 PM
this is perfect Jaffer,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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November 30, 2014 at 7:33 AM
Princess Skat I am from Saudi Arabia....studied in USA....in my free time...I write what I call "Poems" and "Short Stories"....Thank you my dear...wish u always along with the rest of our friends the best of everything...thanks
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November 26, 2014 at 11:53 AM
A beautiful and romantic poem...nicely done Jaffer! :)
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November 27, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Thank you Ana.....You are very kind...warm...and generous.... hugs.
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November 23, 2014 at 5:28 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jaffer - I choose your first lovely and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 25, 2014 at 11:54 PM
Anne Thank you....so kind and sweet of you.....your words will enrich my heart....thanks again
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