The Star

She stands facing the ocean, majestic in awe
Her tears flooding freely for all that is gone

It is the not knowing why, she whispers aloud
An emptiness inside she cannot understand

She did her best, to be his lover, his friend
The crying won't stop, will this ever end

She wipes away a tear, a light catches her eye
She looks up, it disappears; figures she says

She brushes the sand off her trembling body
The light reappears and it is a solitude star

It is tiny and far, though brilliantly lit
She stands up tall and faces the star
She asks for guidance, the how and the why

The star flashes once, then dimly fades away
She pauses and stares, what does this mean

This tiny star will guide her to hope
She feels this light will carry her far
To a place as calm; as the brightly lit star.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Inman Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 9:36 PM
The search for hope in sadness is the definition of the strength of a soul.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 8:13 AM
This is quite beautiful and thought provoking.
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 3:14 PM
I really like this one, dear! It's such fun to find these older ones of yours that I have not seen yet!
Callus Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Such a lovely and touching poem, Lynn. Once again the sea is the setting for your inspiration; its water and tears mixing together. When down, one can feel pain, a need for questions to be answered, but not all is lost....hope shines through the darkness! You make it sound so real, as if it's part of your life. #7 & a fave. Regards // paul
Inman Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 11:49 AM
Another lovely poem Lynn. You write from the heart.
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