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Poetic Form: Prose Poetry

December Days Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Karen Jones

Entry Submitted: 2025 November 01

Contest Judged: 2025 November 11

Contest Placement: 2nd Place

The Standing Stone's December

Here where the hibiscus and the palm tree sway,
December wears a mask, a sun-baked day.
The air is dense, a solemn, muggy sigh;
No frosty breath to hang the winter sky.
The calendar integrates as the year grows old,
But the earth, a young bride, refuses the cold.
No white covering quells the green-clothed land,
Just ocean rumors on sun-drenched sands.
We seek where the stones stand, as assurance’s strong,
A parable of familiarity where we truly belong.
It should be brimmed with ice, a silent guard,
But the tropical heatwave makes the vigil hard.
The stone stands, a heart, unmovable and true,
Yet the absence of snow paints a sky too blue.
This December is a clock with hands reversed,
A winter’s tale delightfully dispersed.
We are the trees, confused, with leaves so bright,
Awaiting shadows that won’t take their flight.
The island dreams of silence, sharp and deep,
While the warm waves roll, a secret it must keep,
That the soul of winter is not in the flake’s soft fall,
But in the resilience of the stone standing tall.
The sun, a fiery bear, keeps the cold wolf at bay,
In this warm December, the stone still holds its sway.
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 11:27 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again with a Great Picture. Have a wonderful day writing away with your win..............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 3:33 PM
Thanks once again, Aloha.
George Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 12:51 AM
"...the soul of winter is not in the flake’s soft fall, But in the resilience of the stone standing tall." Great lines. With a climate strangely going erratic, December can go warm with no snowfall. Lovely thoughts dear William.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:13 AM
Thank you for your highlights of interest, for they are greatly appreciated, Aloha.
Alex Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 9:47 PM
"That the soul of winter is not in the flake’s soft fall, But in the resilience of the stone standing tall." - A very lively nature description as a whole.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, my friend, as it enfolds with bouncing words, reflective of nature’s essence, Aloha, William.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 10:12 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 7:51 AM
Thank you, my friend, and best of luck to you too, Aloha, William.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 4:33 AM
Winter is definitely different in the tropics. I was young when I lived in Hawaii. I had forgotten about the seasons. When we left, our car had been sent to California, we drove across the U.S. to Virginia. When we hit Louisiana, oh my how the leaves were in full color bloom of Autumn. I enjoyed your poem. A fave.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 7:40 AM
Whoa, a heartfelt thanks from the tropics, and yes, year after year, snowless here, except for our mountain top here on the big island, sorree Honolulu, Aloha, William.
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