The Stalker Version 2

the scene is set, the banqueting hall is not looking so shoddy
plenty of wild flowers to hide the smell of unwashed bodies

the ladies in their finery drink gin with gusto ......they presume 
the fancy looking men will drink whatever  they can consume 

then the trumpets sounded, 

heralding that food was being brought in ..... in silver dishes
knaves in all their glory carried platters of meat, chicken, fishes.

this was snatched by the revellers, who rammed into their mouths great chunks of meat.
around the table on the floor were bones by the score 
which the eaters had thrown at their feet dogs waited, salivating, to pounce on  the floor 
 
suddenly another fanfare sounded ....another platter was carried In
this one was covered with a domed lid,  what was so intriguing within?

with aplomb the lord made a speech with a drunken slur
was ranting on about stalkers, how unpleasant they were

with artistic flair he removed the lid

all went quiet ....even the dog's slunk away and hid

sitting on a bed of cabbage was a severed head

this Stalker will stalk no more he said

penned 23/08/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/26/2016 2:22:00 PM
I was sure that photo came from shutterstalker, not shutterstock! Great write.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thanks ....Seren
Date: 8/26/2016 2:22:00 PM
ummm my headache is all gone, co-incidence? not sure yet!!!
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Date: 8/26/2016 6:22:00 AM
I just looked in the mirror...whew...it wasn't me ,..I better check on Art : ))
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2016 4:21:00 PM
Haha..... Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2016 2:22:00 PM
lol
Date: 8/25/2016 4:26:00 AM
MMMM - I got scared reading this - this is a good thing, just proves you managed to get the intended story across - Well written Seren. Mark
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/25/2016 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Mark.for commenting .....Seren
Date: 8/25/2016 1:33:00 AM
Gee Seren this is pretty graphic and gruesome but the ending made me lol. Drop by my latest - think we are dealing with the same person lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/25/2016 1:45:00 AM
Haha Jan we must mix with some weird people .....Seren
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