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The Sprinkler

THE SPRINKLER Moving hoses Of flowing, Flowering, Movement. Running in rills to troughs of sand, Pressing passages through the stones. Pools well with gurgles splashes, Thundering falls with mist skirts of pearls strung on summer breezes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/20/2012 1:48:00 PM
This is a well done poem Wm. - Have a lovely weekend in sunshine and love. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/19/2012 5:49:00 PM
this is so poetic! i love your use of alliteration ("running in rills" is just great!) and the picture you've so perfectly painted.
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