Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

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The Springtime Symphony

Spring is a time of rebirth and rejuvenation,
A vernal season of whimsical invigoration.
Admiration is conveyed through this way,
It relishes a bit like freshly fallen rain spray.

A scent of lemon, aloe, and sieved steaming,
Like ambrosial rosebuds blooming in spring.
A glass of polished ruby bears serenity,
It's saffron on silk with a resolute divinity.

Colorful gown of yellow, green, and blue,
Shimmering in harlequin-inspired hue.
It divinely glides over meadow and field,
Where silky lobed rugs swarm with their yield.

3RD PLACE CONTEST WINNER

Written: April 27, 2022

Spring Rhyme - 8-12 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Paula Goldsmith May 15, 2022 at 8:48 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful Spring write/picture. Today, be blessed as you write away...............

Tania Kitchin May 14, 2022 at 1:05 PM Lasaad, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful Spring poem, "A vernal season of whimsical invigoration", love this line, wonderfully penned!

Jennifer Proxenos April 30, 2022 at 4:29 AM You describe this blossom gilded beautiful tree so perfectly, so aptly and so eloquently. the tree also reminds me of a bride walking to the alter to meet and marry her future husband. What more could I possibly say other than Kudo's my friend Sotto/Lasaad. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2022 at 8:52 AM very pretty imagery, my friend. A sure win!

Gershon Wolf April 28, 2022 at 6:35 PM That 'colorful gown' 'shimmering in harlequin hue...' The ambiance you have created with your pen, LaSaad, is truly heavenly. Magnifique! ~ Gershon

Vijay Pandit April 28, 2022 at 5:33 AM I hear the sound of symphony in your melodic words, Lasaad. Wonderful colors and vibrancy of spring you convey.

Valsa George April 28, 2022 at 2:52 AM "Spring is a time of rebirth and rejuvenation, A vernal season of whimsical invigoration". Arresting opening lines ! You have absorbed all the beauty and loveliness of spring in this small poem.

Anselmo Boles April 28, 2022 at 12:09 AM I can actually picture you conducting this exhilarating and vibrant symphony, carrying a transparent musical director's baton embellished with fragrant flowers. Really beautiful Sotto Poet Lasaad!!...ab

Tom Cunningham April 28, 2022 at 12:05 AM Stunning imagery Lasaad, you've captured the essence of spring well in your verse. Best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Victor Buhagiar April 27, 2022 at 10:28 PM What a wondaful entry for this contest. I will post my poor effort later on but it will be a poor attempt compared to yours. A great verse so inspired. Shows powerful muse. Best for a win.