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The Springtime Symphony

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Spring is a time of rebirth and rejuvenation, A vernal season of whimsical invigoration. Admiration is conveyed through this way, It relishes a bit like freshly fallen rain spray. A scent of lemon, aloe, and sieved steaming, Like ambrosial rosebuds blooming in spring. A glass of polished ruby bears serenity, It's saffron on silk with a resolute divinity. Colorful gown of yellow, green, and blue, Shimmering in harlequin-inspired hue. It divinely glides over meadow and field, Where silky lobed rugs swarm with their yield. 3RD PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: April 27, 2022 Spring Rhyme - 8-12 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/15/2022 8:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful Spring write/picture. Today, be blessed as you write away...............

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2022 1:05:00 PM

Lasaad, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful Spring poem, "A vernal season of whimsical invigoration", love this line, wonderfully penned!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/30/2022 4:29:00 AM

You describe this blossom gilded beautiful tree so perfectly, so aptly and so eloquently. the tree also reminds me of a bride walking to the alter to meet and marry her future husband. What more could I possibly say other than Kudo's my friend Sotto/Lasaad. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2022 8:52:00 AM

very pretty imagery, my friend. A sure win!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2022 6:35:00 PM

That 'colorful gown' 'shimmering in harlequin hue...' The ambiance you have created with your pen, LaSaad, is truly heavenly. Magnifique! ~ Gershon

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/28/2022 5:33:00 AM

I hear the sound of symphony in your melodic words, Lasaad. Wonderful colors and vibrancy of spring you convey.

Valsa George

Date: 4/28/2022 2:52:00 AM

"Spring is a time of rebirth and rejuvenation, A vernal season of whimsical invigoration". Arresting opening lines ! You have absorbed all the beauty and loveliness of spring in this small poem.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 4/28/2022 12:09:00 AM

I can actually picture you conducting this exhilarating and vibrant symphony, carrying a transparent musical director's baton embellished with fragrant flowers. Really beautiful Sotto Poet Lasaad!!...ab

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/28/2022 12:05:00 AM

Stunning imagery Lasaad, you've captured the essence of spring well in your verse. Best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/27/2022 10:28:00 PM

What a wondaful entry for this contest. I will post my poor effort later on but it will be a poor attempt compared to yours. A great verse so inspired. Shows powerful muse. Best for a win.