The Spring Flow

Let go
Of the sorrow
Caused by those who walk low
Like ghosts, possessed by their own woes
Lost souls.

Because
They could not pause
To listen to the sound
Of the spring's clear, pure fountain flow
Love's song.

The voice
That speaks so soft
In the depth of our souls
Words of life and stories of love,
God's own.

Wisdom
Comes to the one
With an ear for the one
Who shares your life for it is you
They chose.

Let go
Of your false thoughts
Coming from unknown ghosts
Loose not your soul in bitter woes,
Death hole.

Love's song
Will be your own
That gives light to your soul
When you taste the spring of life's flow,
Pure gold.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 10.01.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:45 PM
this reads beautifully, Caroline. I love the flow of it. It is what it claims to be. Sring's flow!!
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October 14, 2010 at 6:04 PM
HI, C.C.D,~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"
Knop Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 9:41 AM
Le poème agréable, Caroline, j'ai apprécié le lire cet après-midi! And thank you for your friendly comments! My French is not very good as my Spanish is much better, But I am making progress! Alles Gute et ayez une semaine agréable!...Gert
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Very creative and interesting thoughts well mexpressed in The Spring Flow, Caroline
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October 2, 2010 at 4:25 AM
Excellent write!!! Very good... always Michael
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