Laura Breidenthal Poet Free verse

The Sport

Upon sources I stumbled on a sort
Upon curiosity I caught on to the sport
Not knowing I would actually in truth
Find someone worthwhile in my smattering youth
He wanted much to get to know me
And I just couldn’t get him to see
I was there only as a friend
I was there solely for me…
I cannot mend what I cannot tend
I surely cannot begin what I did not end
Damnit.

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Laila Andresen Mjelde April 28, 2012 at 2:08 PM Thank you so much for sharing, strong words, but excellent written! oxox always Laila

Sara Kendrick April 26, 2012 at 1:49 PM Interesting work..Emotive and expressive..One can't change what has happened only give a listening ear..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, it is yucky to think about the anal gland of beaver being used as a flavoring in candy, teas, drinks, and in cigarettes..Sara

The Situation April 25, 2012 at 8:17 PM I imagine most women feel this way.TYs for your excelent comment.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 23, 2012 at 5:48 AM Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to be able to read yours Laura. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley April 22, 2012 at 4:48 AM Lady's choice eh Laura! I love where you take me with this great verse; and the last two lines say sooooo much! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2012 at 1:27 PM An exciting written poem Laura, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise