The Splashing Morning

the splashing morning
sprinkling the silver poems
on the blue sari

April 13, 2018
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Wolf Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 10:46 PM
Modern art on and with a traditional setting. Nice dualism here, and fresh imagery. It's a winner for me! :) gw
Gupta Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 8:32 PM
Thank you, Gershon ...
Onclaud Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 6:10 PM
remarkably done, probir... i like imagining morn like a sari!.. huggs
Gupta Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:00 PM
Yes, Nette ... our dear earth is never nude ... thank you ... probir
Pandit Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Excellent depiction, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:00 PM
Thank you ...
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:00 AM
- Lovely .... good morning, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 13, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ...
George   Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 11:58 PM
Lovely Haiku, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Elaine ...
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April 12, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Splendid!
Gupta Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Thank you, Maureen ...
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