John Freeman Poet Free verse

The Spirit's Four Winds

Maverick(Vers libre)

~From precept life, for lack of moral concept fell,
   Into the mind by the serpent’s spell,
   Faith’s Agape copy became very sloppy,
   Now life must live with these bitter pills,
   Unto the seventh of  seven judgments unseal,
  “Until!” Four apocalyptic horseman ride to rid!

~As minds elite group seeks to form to the world’s alarm,
   Into chaos they lead of mind serpent greed,
   Faith precept ignored governs a wilderness of mind explored,
   By neurotic of minds chaotic , the serpent slithers…Selah!!!

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Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2011 at 10:47 PM Interesting one, john. I particularly liked your first stanza as I know somewhat of your life conversion story. Hey, what is the reason for the word maverick at the top of the stanzas?

James Tate February 25, 2011 at 10:04 AM John, you certainly know how to weave a thought in verse! Very good warning for Satan's sloppy copy of Purity. Thanks much for selecting my Stream of Life poem as second place position in your contest. Makes a guy feel like keeping on. Oh, I almost missed the deadline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 24, 2011 at 12:44 PM A perfect read for me Moses my friend as the serpent's spell will not get me to waiver in my faith with my vision issues ..thankxx for your blog comment luv.. this is an attack..pure and simple .. and am standing fast on "Greater is HE that is in me than he that is in this world.. my friend.. appreciate the prayers luv..

Nette Onclaud February 23, 2011 at 8:58 AM insightful as it is totally wonderful, john! :) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick February 22, 2011 at 7:46 PM This prophetic verse leaves us with much to ponder, John. Love, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta February 22, 2011 at 5:48 PM I enjoyed the philosophical write on the the Spirit's four winds, john

Anthony Nutter February 22, 2011 at 12:25 PM Revelations as an inspiration, the horsemen preparing to ride. Excdellent piece.

Joe Maverick February 22, 2011 at 12:16 PM on you've hit the spot with this John.