The Spider My Sister Killed- Part 2

The little spider kept on showing
My friend advised me
With time they will all come
I denied it childishly 
With eggs laid out
Hundreds and millions 
They will become
To the bathroom I went again 
The little spider was hanging in the air
To his narrow web 
I called to my sister
Come
And kill him 
She brought a shoe 
Stroke him hardly 
I felt pity and dull
He was still moving
With no mercy she said
I will relieve him from his pain 
With a stroke 
He lay dead and crushed
I looked away from the little spider
And left the bathroom
To continue a day of none
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Effendi Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 2:14 AM
Impressive and cute story. I enjoyed reading it, Louzana. Blessings Taha.
Nubani Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 7:41 AM
Thanks :) I'm Glad you did :) :D
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