The Spider and Me

 The spider and me… 	

The spider and me… 
In the garden that was called Garden of Love,
 I was flying with a silver feathered dove.
 I was dancing among a bunch of flowers,
 I was drinking their dew, drunk from their powers. 
Flowers all around, as far you can see,
 the rainbow of colors boundless as a sea. 
There were dancers and singers enjoying life.
 But a spider was hiding in its strife. 
He was hiding within a web of deception, 
He was convinced that love alters perception.
 His heart was filled with anger and nothing more,
 He did not care what is real anymore. 
I was dancing like an angel in the sky,
 What is a garden without me, the butterfly?
 Kissing every petal dancing with the wind; 
No one cared that I was young and I had sinned. 
I was in love with life and out of my mind, 
I had so much desire I couldn’t hide. 
I was young when I first saw that web of lies, 
In its center was the spider in disguise. 
He saw me that I was in love and insane, 
That I was dancing till dawn with any pain. 
From his shadows, he saw my life was so bright. 
He called my name when I was dancing with light.
 I ignored him, and I escaped getting trapped; 
The whole garden cheered for me, and they clapped. 
I laughed at him and ran with the warmest breeze.
 I went to hide and danced with blossoming trees. 
A day had passed, and I danced in the sun’s ray. 
He called me once again at dawn the next day. 
I was so young, and I was full of sunshine.
 I was changing the dew into the red wine.
 I was too drunk to know what was going on,
 the years they came, and soon, like dreams, they’re gone.
 He told me that his web is soft and is loose, 
and I want to leave; I go when I choose.
 I ignored him and danced without any care. 
The youthfulness given to youth is unfair.
 They do not know what the gift is to be young.
 They don’t know how the singings ought to be sung.
 The next day, once again, he called me with smile;
 He told me to come in sit down for a while. 
Again, I ran away; I flew from his sight.
 I did not come back until that dreadful night. 
That night, I was tired, maybe I grew old, 
Suddenly, my garden felt like moonlight cold. 
The spring passed, and summer’s gone, and now is Fall; 
What else is there except pain, and that is all?
 The spider is calling once more with a roar, 
I cannot sing and dance; don’t care anymore.
 I am tired of pain, lonely, and too cold. 
There is no one to play when you're getting old.
 My spider, he knows how old is my age. 
He will love me and bury me in my cage.
2/3/2017  Haloo
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Buck Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Pashang: I'm just a silly rhymer but I found this to be wonderfully done. Youthfulness given to youth is unfair. . . I cannot sing and dance. Don't care anymore. Beautiful insight into "life". Thanks for sharing this with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
Salehi Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 2:38 PM
You are extremely talented buck .... thanks for kind words
Maverick Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 4:32 PM
A read that shows different aspects of or perceptions Pashang, well done and congratulations on the win.'
Salehi Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Thanks Joe.... my spider in knocking at my door.........
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 6:31 PM
great personification pashang:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Salehi Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 2:35 AM
Thanks Jan.... You are so kind..
Sathasivam Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 5:18 AM
Excellent. Lovely fairy tale . Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Salehi Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Thanks Ravi..
Y. Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 11:23 PM
Hi Pashang, Congratulations on your fine win: -) Alexis
Salehi Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Thanks.... I Got huge amount of money as well.... LOL
Callus Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Great use of personification, Pashang, and your narrative in rhyme is both lovely and sad. Seeing that this is a winning entry, I offer you my congratulations! // paul
Salehi Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Thank you Paul...
Sietesantos Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Excellent fairy tale that I enjoyed reading! Well done and congratulations on a worthy win! Pandita
Salehi Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 9:10 PM
Thank you..
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 8:51 PM
wow, DEEP one. I really really liked where this one went. Such a great analogy to life, Pashang. SEVEN
Salehi Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Thank you...
Salehi Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 9:08 PM
I got 14.... lol thank you Andrea
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Pashang, love your story,,, youth has its advantages, but age can really slow us all down.. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Salehi Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 9:10 PM
Thank you...
Rycroft Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 3:34 AM
Wow exellent great poem x
Salehi Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 1:30 PM
Thank you..
Warrior Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 2:46 PM
Superbly done Pashang...a great Personification my friend...welcome back...god bless...^WW^
Salehi Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 3:55 PM
Thank you my friend... I was never gone, I hide sometimes... I was struggling with the spider ...
Murray Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 9:13 AM
A story of lost youth? How well you portrayed it's boundless energy and joy. I don't like that spider Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Thank you Jean... It's life, isn't it?
Downing  Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 2:26 PM
It is very touching, I love it :) Beautiful work, Pashang :)
Salehi Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 11:29 PM
You are so kind... Thank you dear
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 5:55 AM
- A truly wonderful poem, Pashang ... touching end - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Thank you Anne Lise, I'm glad .....
Turner Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 2:50 PM
I wasn't expecting a sad ending, Pashang. A very enjoyable read. Great to see you again:)
Salehi Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Thanks DT, love to hear from you too.... P.S
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February 3, 2017 at 2:59 PM
Thanks DT, love to hear from you too.... P.S
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